What did Mao strive to change during the Communist Revolution and what was its result?

By Patrick Shaw

Research Question: What did Mao strive to change during the Communist Revolution and what was its result?

Thesis Statement:

Topic Sentence #1: He was changing the philosophy in people towards their old government.

Topic Sentence #2: He also made China more respected world wide after he changed their government to something more positive.

Topic Sentence #3: But he was also overwhelmed by the power and soon turned himself into a dictator and started to destroy important aspects of China’s history.